The Celebrated Jumping Frog of Calaveras County: Plot Analysis

Written by Raden Mohammad R. S.


I Want To Know

Written in 1865, this short story by Mark Twain was an overnight success and reprinted all over the country. In fact, this is the piece of writing that launched Mark Twain into fame . "The Celebrated Jumping Frog" focuses on a narrator from the East suffering through a Western man's tall tale about a jumping frog. The story was made into an opera and performed at Indiana University in 1950. Today, the city of Angel's Camp, California, the setting for this short story, calls itself the "Home of the Jumping Frog." [1]



Plot

Gustav Freytag was a Nineteenth Century German novelist who saw common patterns in the plots of stories and novels and developed a diagram to analyze them. He diagrammed a story's plot using a pyramid like the one shown here:

FYI

Exposition: setting the scene. The writer introduces the characters and setting, providing description and background.

Inciting Incident: something happens to begin the action. A single event usually signals the beginning of the main conflict. The inciting incident is sometimes called 'the complication'.

Rising Action: the story builds and gets more exciting.

Climax: the moment of greatest tension in a story. This is often the most exciting event. It is the event that the rising action builds up to and that the falling action follows.

Falling Action: events happen as a result of the climax and we know that the story will soon end.

Resolution: the character solves the main problem/conflict or someone solves it for him or her.

Dénouement: (a French term, pronounced: day-noo-moh) the ending. At this point, any remaining secrets, questions or mysteries which remain after the resolution are solved by the characters or explained by the author. Sometimes the author leaves us to think about the THEME or future possibilities for the characters.[2]


Analysis  

I am interested to analysis the Twain's story. I use Freytag's pyramid as my reference in analyzing the plot in this story.

Exposition:

Beginning of the story, the story leads us to the characters and setting. In the beginning of the story, the narrator (I or maybe we can say he/she is an author) said that the narrator had a job from his/her friend that he needed to find Simon Wheeler and asked him about Reverend Leonidas W. Smiley.

In compliance with the request of a friend of mine who wrote me from the East, I called on good-natured, garrulous old Simon Wheeler and inquired after my friend’s friend, Leonidas W. Smiley, as requested to do, and I hereunto append1 the result.

We can see the story begins to describe the setting in this part:

“I found Simon Wheeler dozing comfortably by the barroom stove of the dilapidated tavern in the decayed mining camp of Angel’s, and I noticed that he was fat and baldheaded and had an expression of winning gentleness and simplicity upon his tranquil countenance.”

The story begins to bring us to the conflict. When the narrator found Simon Wheeler, the man didn’t talk about Reverend Leonidas W. Smiley, but started talking about another man named Jim Smiley. In here, the story changes from narrator story to the Wheeler’s story and turns Wheeler becomes the narrator.

Inciting incident:

Still in the Wheeler’s story (Wheeler as Narrator), the story tells us how is Smiley addictive to gambling.

“….he was the curiousest man about always betting on anything that turned up you ever see, if he could get anybody to bet on the other side, and if he couldn’t he’d change sides….”

Because of that, the conflict appears. The first conflict is there was no longer something to bet on.

“Well, thish-yer Smiley had rat terriers, and chicken cocks, and tomcats and all them kind of things till you couldn’t rest, and you couldn’t fetch nothing for him to bet on but he’d match you.”


Rising action:

The story begins to evolve. There are several hooks. First, when Smiley caught a frog and named it Dan'l Webster, he taught the frog to jump higher than any other frog. He was doing this he wanted to win when he bet the frog.

“…He ketched a frog one day and took him home, and said he cal’lated to educate him; and so he never done nothing for three months but set in his back yard and learn that frog to jump… Jumping on a dead level was his strong suit, you understand; and when it come to that, Smiley would ante up money on him as long as he had a red.”

Second, when he met a feller and he wanted gambling with him. Smiley bet 40 dollars that Webster could beat any frog.

“Anyways, I’ve got my opinion, and I’ll resk forty dollars that he can outjump any frog in Calaveras County.”

Third, when the feller cheated.

“….So he set there a good while thinking and thinking to himself, and then he got the frog out and prized his mouth open and took a teaspoon and filled him full of quail shot…”


Climax:

The climax in the story is when Smiley came back with another frog, Smiley tried to prove if Webster could jump higher than the other could. But, unfortunately, Webster could not jump. 

“‘Now, if you’re ready, set him alongside of Dan’l, with his forepaws just even with Dan’l’s, and I’ll give the word.’ Then he says, ‘One—two—three—git! ’ and him and the feller touched up the frogs from behind, and the new frog hopped off lively, but Dan’l give a heave and hysted up his shoulders—so—like a Frenchman, but it warn’t no use—he couldn’t budge; he was planted as solid as a church, and he couldn’t no more stir than if he was anchored out. Smiley was a good deal surprised, and he was disgusted too, but he didn’t have no idea what the matter was, of course…

Falling action:

Towards to the end of the story, after his defeat, Smiley had found the quail shot after he examined what was wrong with Webster. He tried to go after the stranger, but the stranger was already gone, taking his money with him.

“Smiley he stood scratching his head and looking down at Dan’l a long time, and at last he says, ‘I do wonder what in the nation that frog throw’d off for—I wonder if there ain’t something the matter with him—he ’pears to look mighty baggy, somehow.’ And he ketched Dan’l by the nap of the neck and hefted him, and says, ‘Why, blame my cats if he don’t weigh five pound!’ and turned him upside down and he belched out a double handful of shot. And then he see how it was, and he was the maddest man—he set the frog down and took out after that feller, but he never ketched him…”

Resolution:

The narrator came back to his/her own story when Simon Wheeler was interrupted by Narrator, it means that the story comes back to narrator story. The narrator thought that hearing Smiley's story wouldn't help him get information about Reverend Leonidas W. Smiley:

“But, by your leave, I did not think that a continuation of the history of the enterprising vagabond Jim Smiley would be likely to afford me much information concerning the Rev. Leonidas W. Smiley and so I started away.”

Because of that, the narrator decided to leave.


“At the door I met the sociable Wheeler returning, and he buttonholed me and recommenced: ‘Well, thish-yer Smiley had a yaller one-eyed cow that didn’t have no tail, only just a short stump like a bannanner, and—' However, lacking both time and inclination, I did not wait to hear about the afflicted cow but took my leave.”

Conclusion


From that plot analysis, I find some interesting results. Maybe, Mark Twain is the narrator of the story, and he is a participant in his story. He writes the outer frame of the story from his perspective.  Then, Simon Wheeler (a character who becomes a narrator) tells the story to the Twain about one of Jim Smiley’s story.  So, the structure of point of view of this story is very unique. The events happened to a Jim Smiley, as was told by Simon Wheeler, as was heard and re-written by Mark Twain. From its plot structure, there is no Dénouement because the story doesn't make another story.

Note

the story from: goodreads.com
[1] Shmoop Editorial Team. (2008, November 11). The Celebrated Jumping Frog of Calaveras County. Retrieved March 26, 2017, from http://www.shmoop.com/celebrated-jumping-frog-calaveras/
[2] Ohio.edu. (nd). Analyzing a story's plot: Freytag's Pyramid. Retrieved March 26, 2017, from http://www.ohio.edu/people/hartleyg/ref/fiction/freytag.html

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